You have made a good start here but there are a couple of things you need to address: - check your spelling, punctuation and grammar at all times - there are a couple of things I had to read a few times as I could not make them out - the task is not quite complete (new deadline = 26.09.16)
You ask for help when needed which is encouraging but you do need to speed up a little bit. If needed, you will have to move to a faster machine!!
Robert,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here but there are a couple of things you need to address:
- check your spelling, punctuation and grammar at all times - there are a couple of things I had to read a few times as I could not make them out
- the task is not quite complete (new deadline = 26.09.16)
You ask for help when needed which is encouraging but you do need to speed up a little bit. If needed, you will have to move to a faster machine!!
Ellie